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Underwater Prayer

Immerse me Lord beneath the salty sea send me bubbles of love that sparkle blue Shoot me to the top aqua pure and free As I plunge so vulnerable deep viewed the channels of life's paths I do not flee whimpering in distress bottomward brewed while evil oozes in a whisper plea don't let me skid among bedrock subdued baptize me of passion while by my side hug me as I cling to the rushing tide. copyright 9/15/15 Tammy Reams Contest sponsored by: Heather Ober 'My Favorite Form' Contest Sponsored by: 'Broken Wing Trashed #2' Placed 9th

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Date: 10/14/2015 10:08:00 PM
Tammy, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Skat A. Have a nice weekend.
Date: 10/12/2015 12:47:00 PM
Baptize me of my passion-sch purity of thought Tammy! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:11:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment Balveen.
Date: 10/12/2015 3:19:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Tammy! Wonder why such a beautiful poem got trashed in any contest?
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment Dr. Upma.
Date: 10/11/2015 9:32:00 PM
Tammy, I love the metaphors in your inspirational prayer to the Lord for help. Very profound and deep. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:09:00 AM
Thank you Sandra sorry I'm late in responding.
Date: 10/11/2015 3:21:00 PM
a beautiful poem Tammy many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Hugs back.
Date: 9/22/2015 12:56:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your spiritually based contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/23/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for the nice comment Sara!
Date: 9/16/2015 6:16:00 PM
your poem is very pretty, I enjoyed the ride through that particular water ... CayCay
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Date: 9/17/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Cay Cay for the wonderful comment.
Date: 9/16/2015 5:59:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Tammy :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne for the nice comment. Hugs back to you.

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