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Fear trickled down her spine as the razor blade appeared. "Try it." they said, "It'll make all the bad things disappear." And so she obliged, without a moment to hesitate. And this morning I found her: eyes dead, lips blue. The smell of regret lingering over her like a mother watching her baby sleep. And it was sad; the way she went. hating herself, hating the world. that torturous blade. Ending so many beautiful things

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/25/2015 9:17:00 PM
Thank you all! Your kind comments are greatly appreciated :) I look forward to reading your works as well!
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:59:00 AM
Hi Cecilia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:15:00 AM
Cecilia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/22/2015 8:31:00 AM
A sad poem that deals with the reality of life rationally and with blunt force, forgoing the dreams and promises of youth for the reality of life lost. The poem has a message and delivers it well. Emile #7
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:00:00 AM
- Hey Cecilia nice to read your first poem :) - Welcome to P - Soup !! - Hope to read many more poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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