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Understepping Poem Three

Sometimes my life makes no sense at all. Will I escape from my confusion? Do you Wonder what is wrong with me? I sometimes wonder if I'll escape. When the voices come I run and hide. Is this who I am destined to be? Just a man who has become crazy. See Understepping One and Two for rules to understanding form

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/27/2012 5:57:00 PM
From your creative mind comes the discovery of another new form! This is really exciting. I love Questionkus...which is challenging...I've written some but not confident enough to post them, yet. Thank you for sharing your craft with us, Richard. A very happy New Year to you and yours! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/27/2012 2:29:00 PM
I hear the voices and Just a man who has become crazy?...Interesting work..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2012 3:18:00 PM
Just playing around, no voices in my head to keep me company ha ha. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 12/27/2012 9:37:00 AM
Amazing...nice share Richard <3<3<3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Sukmawati.
Date: 12/27/2012 9:17:00 AM
Hummm.. Challenging, i will try this :D
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/27/2012 9:44:00 AM
I'm done :D check mine :D
Date: 12/27/2012 8:35:00 AM
love it... nice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2012 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Jacob

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