Undercurrent of Melancholy

Undercurrent of Melancholy beneath yawning ribs time-eaten bay sinks down the sea-poose of the blues carrying somber hues mind reverberates with the fall of ice sullies tramp down a stuffed soul ushering in smolder against it come the menacing thunders through the world not left at peace and spin old memories Pick A Title, Vol 11 - Kimo(3 Stanzas) - Poetry Contest Enter Contest 4. Undercurrent of Melancholy Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 15 November, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 6:25:00 PM

Most beautiful, Rajat, good for a win... I see you didn't read my soup mail.. Sonny died last year on August 29.. his heart couldn't take any more.. after 6 way bypass, then later a pacemaker defibrillator, then Prostate Cancer , then again a second pacemaker defibrillator , congestive heart failure. He is dearly missed. Hugs dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/22/2019 7:14:00 AM

I am very saddened to hear this, Eve. He will be dearly missed. You are much creative and that's most important now. Hugs.-Rajat

Eve Roper

Date: 11/15/2019 11:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Rajat, great for the contest, but Edward is wanting 3 stanzas. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/17/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I failed to notice. Now, it's a 3-stanza-poem. Please read it. I will be happy. Thank you.-Rajat