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Under Your Spell

Under your spell Am I in heaven or hell? I’ve bled too many times The clock still chimes Under your spell You torture me…I’m falling in a well I’ve said “I love you” too many times The clock still chimes My dreams are broken But, I feel good with you around I’m sorry, I must flee and open Up the gate to peace…you threw me to the ground Under your spell I’ve lost my mind…oh well I’ve been lost for so long Life’s like a song Under your spell You defeated me…with your spell I’ve said “I hate you”, but I don’t mean it I love you, friend – at least I admit it My dreams are broken But, I feel good with you around I’m sorry, I must flee and open Up the gate to elation…you pick me up from the ground And you are forgiven Under your spell I can’t believe I’ve fallen in your trap Can you hear me in the well? I can’t believe you have threw me in here – cut the crap Under your spell I’m looking overhead for some sunlight Pour forth bliss upon me…get me out of this living hell Hold on…don’t let go of me…good night Good night…take flight tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/26/2013 6:56:00 PM
yes this is love. uncontrolable. drives you crazy no matter what age. any relation to Laura.
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Date: 8/27/2013 7:26:00 PM
yes. I'm her bro. :) It's actually a mixture of things. ;o Yeah, true; everything you said is true
Date: 8/25/2013 12:28:00 PM
Sounds like time to move on to another--that is if this is about love that's incomplete. It's funny how the more we want something, the harder it is to find. It's such a strange part of life. It's just so difficult when the feelings are so intense. I remember dreaming about loves. It was a tough time. Very tough.
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