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Under This Red Umbrella

UNDER THIS RED UMBRELLA The rain did not stop us romantically. Our love was to be enjoyed. Life span was our imagery. We are young adults in love. We walked in an embrace. We talked about family and friends. We were unity of togetherness in this scene. I looked away shortly and saw others doing the same. That momentary endeavor drew his attention as well. He leaned forward with protection so that I would not get wet. This red umbrella glisten from the night lights as we stroll through the park. The tree leaves were wet; this was autumn. Good spirits were in optimistic to longevity. The red umbrella reflects the leaves of the trees as it does my man’s adoration of me. Under this red umbrella are images of love! _____________________________________| User Name: Verlena S. Walker – Nom De Plume: Oblivion Dark Sunshine Sponsor: Leonora Galinta Personification of Lovers done for Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" Free Poetry Contest Entry Date: March 22, 2014

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Date: 4/4/2014 9:20:00 PM
Verlena, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/4/2014 11:30:00 PM
thanks kim... verlena
Date: 4/4/2014 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on this winning work..Way to go.Sara
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/4/2014 11:30:00 PM
thanks sara. verlena
Date: 4/3/2014 10:29:00 PM
VERLENA, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/3/2014 10:31:00 PM
Thanks Skat... Verlena
Date: 4/3/2014 5:04:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/3/2014 10:31:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 11:48:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/3/2014 12:16:00 AM
Thanks Linda... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 4:05:00 PM
Sweet! Good job and congrats. I would have placed it higher. BG
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Barbara for your real support... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 11:21:00 AM
- Hey Verlena - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Anne. Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 10:59:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Verlena! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Leonora. Verlena
Date: 3/24/2014 8:40:00 AM
Verlena Such a passionate and romantic write. Full of heart. love and sincerity. Thanks for the great comment on my Racism poem.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/24/2014 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Robin... Verlena
Date: 3/8/2014 2:09:00 PM
damn romantic! good job! :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/8/2014 2:22:00 PM
Thanks for the thumbs up and please visit me again soon... I appreciate your comments... :)s Verlena
Date: 2/22/2014 7:51:00 AM
(Red umbrella) very romantic and sweet you- made the love survive through the season of cold
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/25/2014 2:34:00 AM
Thanks Saliam... Love last in warmth... :) Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine

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