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Under the Weather

Today I feel a bit under the weather I think it's the flu,I want to get better You made me soup and gave me some oj Baby you have definitely made my day But It doesn't matter if I'm sick or well You always make me feel so special Waking up next to you, trump's bad days My darling your love, continues to amaze I've never regretted saying I do, I couldn't imagine a life without you 1-4-16 Alexis Y

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/5/2017 7:37:00 AM

A refreshing poem that adds some meaning to the vow, "in sickness and in health." Very intimate and loving poem, Alexis. It's always nice to have someone help tend to you when you're under the weather. A very spiritual, yet so human poem. Great job w/expressing your thoughts through this poem. Love it. A healthy cup of Soup 7 for you and this sweet poem. Love and good health to you, dear.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/4/2017 9:57:00 AM

I loved the whole poem especially the words "trump's bad days." Lol.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 10:02:00 AM

Hi Afzal, It's good to see you. I don't look at from that angel. I must say "I" like that part too. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

White Wolf

Date: 1/4/2017 9:50:00 AM

I can just picture you all snuggled up in bed with a nice bowl of soup, and your poetrysoup of course. Haha. Chicken noodle I find good for the flu! Get well soon, still, your poetry hasn't suffered.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 9:55:00 AM

Hi Rick, All of these nice comments are having a positive affect on my spirit. That alone is making me feel better. Thank you so much. I'm glad you stopped by:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2017 7:45:00 AM

Very sweet Alexis. I hope you are feeling better soon . :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 7:58:00 AM

Hi Heidi, Thanks. Me too. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 1/4/2017 7:41:00 AM

So sweet, it's nice to have someday to dote on you when you're sick. The flu is even worse when nobody cares.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 7:48:00 AM

Hi Paloma, It's so good to see you. I agree, having someone by your side when you don't feel well is very special. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/4/2017 7:41:00 AM

Poo Pants! Sending you million doller chick'n doodle soup and seventy three get-well-free cards! plus huggersnickens ~ john

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 8:03:00 AM

Hi John, WoW! What a great comment. It most definitely uplifted my spirit. Thank you very much.I am happy that you stopped today:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 1/4/2017 7:28:00 AM

Ah, that was so nice to read my sweet friend but so sad to hear you aren't feeling well. Hope you feel better soon. The flu sucks.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 7:43:00 AM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much. I agree the flu sucks and the rain doesn't make it any better. I appreciate that you were the first to comment:-) Alexis