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Under the Sun

As he sat apron the earth, He noticed it was not dark to see, For the earth was beautiful against the darkness, The stars shined brightly has the twinkled, The moon glow danced on the waves in the wind, He must have sat there a while, Has the daylight broke, The sun started to rise, Just above the sea bringing with it, The most beautiful colours he’s ever seen, He noticed the grass was very moist and green, Heard the buzzing of the morning bees, Whistled along to the early morning song. Watched the birds fly across the sky, As they headed south, He laid back on the earth, And said what a wonderful place I have created

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/22/2015 4:54:00 AM
I love your vivid descriptions of nature. You are a very fine and passionate poet! I really admire your work! "And said what a wonderful place I have created " WOW! What an ending...so perfect! I'm intrigued! Always, Laura
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Davina Browne
Date: 6/1/2017 1:26:00 AM
Ty hun its about the creater of the world.

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