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All of you is more than enough for me to woo Kids in the nest waiting and I have things to do Let me go, it’s enough and keep it for night to coo. I am under your spell and can’t say no to you. Crave my heart and it’s bleeding only for you My every need and thirst you satisfy is true Take care what you ask me let’s not overdo. I am under your spell and can’t say no to you Never enough, it’s never enough ever anew My love for none, one more time all I ask you Need one more as I am under your spell too You’re under my spell and can’t say no to do..
+++ April 17, 2014 Form: Monorhyme Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Men Only by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/24/2014 12:25:00 PM
Doc, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on this deserving write. RAY
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Date: 4/24/2014 12:08:00 PM
A worthy winner with a worthy write. Saying 'no' is not always that easy to say! congrats. // paul
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Date: 4/24/2014 11:56:00 AM
Lovely write sir..:) 2nd stanza mmmmn :) , Congratulations :)!,olive
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Date: 4/24/2014 11:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:45:00 AM
A passionate piece Dr. Ram. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/24/2014 7:10:00 AM
Great work...
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Date: 4/24/2014 1:38:00 AM
Lovely write n a great win Dr Ram ,,, always wonderful to read ,,,, congrats ,,,/Upma/
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:41:00 PM
nice win Dr Ram...Linda
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:57:00 PM
Dr. Ram A unique and interesting write. Congrats on your win. Thank you for the great comment on my Mind Tricks poem.
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:15:00 PM
A very passionate write, Dr. Ram. You made great use of the monorhyme form with this poem. Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/24/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thanks for the appreciation, kelly
Date: 4/17/2014 9:24:00 AM
Lol, a funny one!
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