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Under the Sea

Under the sea plays a colorful show, Of bioluminescent jelly fish that glow, In corals reefs with psychedelic hues, Glittering in reds, pinks, greens, and blues, Fascinating creatures both speckled and striped, Swim down to the deep that's absent of light, And here is where there lurks for man, A world he has yet to understand, With bottomless currents that tug and flow, To where only the imagination and mermaids can go-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 7:09:00 PM
such vivid imagery Genevieve a delightful rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 1:20:00 AM
I am no great poet -I write from the heart and just have fun and its helped and is helping me through the worst period of my life. Don't worry about responding - spending time doing other things especially playing with the grand kids is the most important thing - it will give you more things to inspire you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Genevieve Mika-Stevens
Date: 8/28/2015 11:13:00 PM
Jan Allison - sorry for the late response...try to fit time to read the poetry sites, keep up with the scrabble club, and watch the grand children...needless to say the computer time comes last. Then lastly, thank you for reading and as I've always said, I'm no great poet but have fun putting words together............
Date: 8/13/2015 4:48:00 PM
this is a well rhymed piece.
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Date: 8/13/2015 2:57:00 PM
Na very deceptive piece. I like it. I hope you will stop pass something and take a look at some of my work. I think you might enjoy Moon Light. I hope you have a good day!!!
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