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Under the Rain

After the night the boy Drain all of his blood, Then ran into the rain Which very sharp in skin When the body deflating There is a hunk of wind in his hand Vitrified

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/12/2012 9:07:00 AM
Good imagery welcome to the soup!!! :))
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Yunizar Nassyam
Date: 2/6/2013 11:59:00 AM
thank you Edward
Date: 12/3/2012 7:03:00 AM
hi Yunizar...its so nice to read your great share,..welcoming you in the soup... hope to read more of your great writes..salam kenal...SK:)
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Yunizar Nassyam
Date: 2/6/2013 12:01:00 PM
thank you Sukma. salam kenal...

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