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Under the Moon of Love

My newly bride not too thin On honeymoon she decided to slim We made love every night Under the most lovely moonlight And now the wanting tide can come in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 6:19:00 AM
James the title of this one got my attention ... really loved it and I see below me its a winner so congrates .. love Jayne x x x
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations James on your 4th place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:37:00 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy your wonderful win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations for your win, James. Well deserved. Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:33:00 AM
Make way for the tide by shedding a few pounds making love on the beach. Very funny, James. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. I enjoyed your limerick; funny, romantic and cheeky all in one. Best of luck!
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:56:00 PM
hmmm, you worked off her weight with lovemaking! VERRRRY interesting, and cute!
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Date: 5/23/2010 10:13:00 AM
Thank you for the comment on my poem i appreciate it i love this poem you are very good. ~Alicia~
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Date: 5/22/2010 1:09:00 PM
I appreciate your very nice comments Mr. Highlander James and enjoyed reading this funny poem ..I wrote poems for the contests for now as I like them so much. You are a very kind gentleman. Satin Doll Diva
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:20:00 PM
Im going to try this as soon as I find a fat man...hahahah..BG
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:53:00 AM
funny and romantic
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Date: 5/22/2010 11:18:00 AM
You're a dork! That was really funny, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2010 10:56:00 AM
Sex as a diet plan, Maybe that would work better than salads, hmm . Good luck in contest
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