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Under the Moon In June

I cringed as she reached for a prune in June as we gazed at the moon, I kissed her before she ate any more, and knew she'd be running off soon... written 5th June for Andrea's Moon in June contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2022 1:53:00 PM

Excellent, Jack!! Both the content and smooth flow of this Limerick are proof of your writing ability in this poetic form. Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2022 1:25:00 PM

Back with congrats. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2022 9:44:00 AM

Great giggle Jack. Lesson - never eat prunes in the moonlight! Congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2022 11:45:00 PM

Ha, I nearly put this in third place. This is a really good one, Jack. Thanks for entering it in my contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2022 3:50:00 PM

Reads like a winner. Way to go. I imagine this was easy to think of since things that you go through. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2022 11:30:00 AM

LOL! She’ll be making that pruneface!

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/5/2022 9:19:00 AM

So worth a laugh out loud. Good limerick, Jack.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/5/2022 9:18:00 AM

Oh my! Another very funny one, Jack. Good luck in the contest. I think Andrea was looking for humor.