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"under the Blanket"

The sweet taste of your morning kiss... For under the blanket a mystery of bliss... Our toes tingle to what's hidden beneath.... As our hearts sing while we cling to the sheets....

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Diane Locksley

Date: 9/24/2010 5:06:00 PM

No, don't come out from under the blanket! Stay there and enjoy yourselves. What a fun poem, Michael.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 11:22:00 AM

Come out from under the blanket!! Just kidding Michael, warm feeling while reading your couplet.. Could not help but smile :) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2010 6:18:00 AM

If you put this message in Tanka form it would make a great entry for Chris's "sanctuary" contest. Great work, Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 5:51:00 PM

why thank you Michael! One more to go... Couplets, i love this poetry form. Second favorite next to haiku. Love the image and the tenderness a morning can bring when your next to the love of your life. Nice blanket cover-up.. ;-) wink ;-) wink! smiles to you, have a wonderful one,..your poet friend,..L.)