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Under Love's Green Canopy

Under Love's Green Canopy Love’s golden thread binds my heart to yours; and in beautiful silence, we lie breathless in the dark of early morning, drifting through fathomless depths of pure, brown-sugared ecstasy, inhaling the sweet fragrance of shared delights. Nectar-dipped kisses lingering on the nape of my neck, you caress the curves of my electrified body, and run your fingers through the silky, curly tendrils of my hair… like birds, nesting under the green canopy of a Banyan Tree. Date: 02-26-2020 Contest: Writing Prompt - Ten Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Placement: 3rd

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Date: 6/22/2020 5:36:00 AM
Pandita, this is lovely muse of love under a green canopy. Congratulation also for fine placement in the winners list. Hugs. Mohan
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/22/2020 10:00:00 AM
Awww, thanks very much, Mohan, for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/9/2020 11:21:00 AM
This is deliciously good. I see as well that congrats are in order. Hugs Rick.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/9/2020 11:47:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear Rick! If it's not too late, I will definitely try to enter a piece for your contest! Hugs. Pandita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2020 11:21:00 AM
Pandita, please consider entering my current contest.
Date: 4/8/2020 5:24:00 PM
Hi Pandita: You used the words and rhymn so beautifully! A belated congratulations!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/9/2020 11:48:00 AM
Hi Ralph, thank you for stopping by and leaving your wonderful compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/22/2020 10:14:00 AM
Wow!! I can fully understand how this was awarded first place...superb piece of poetry, Pandita. My warmest regards! :) john
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/22/2020 5:49:00 PM
Hi John, it's great to receive your lovely compliments! Thank you very much! Have an enjoyable weekend! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 3/21/2020 12:06:00 PM
Hi Pandita, how well you have used the special words in this excellent write. You paint the most beautiful images in the mind, through your soft, gentle words. This is a poetic gem that does bring the heart peace. Has to be a fav. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/22/2020 5:47:00 PM
Dear Mike, I do hope you're enjoying excellent health! I am so appreciative of your lavish praises! Thank you so much, my friend and have a wonderful weekend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/11/2020 3:43:00 AM
Lovely romantic poem.. Congrats on your win Pandita..
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/13/2020 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/10/2020 6:14:00 PM
Pandita, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/22/2020 5:40:00 PM
Hi Constance, thank you so much and I am delighted about the win! Have a safe and enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/29/2020 10:52:00 AM
You used the words so well and wrote a great poem..
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/1/2020 12:20:00 PM
SO, thank you so very much for your wonderful, complimentary words that I appreciate! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/28/2020 11:49:00 PM
This is a breathtakingly lovely poem, Pandita. So charmingly romantic! :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/29/2020 12:00:00 AM
Thank you so kindly Ms. Evelyn for visiting and leaving your wonderful compliments! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 2/26/2020 10:37:00 PM
A lot of passion between these lines, well done Pandita...
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/27/2020 12:15:00 AM
Hey Charlie, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/26/2020 9:35:00 PM
SMOKIN' !!!! You certainly got my attention with this one, Pandita. Excellent penning. Winner, winner, chicken dinner. lol
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/27/2020 12:13:00 AM
Hehehehe - happy to hear from you sweet Danny - got your attention (lol)! Hope you're doing well my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/26/2020 4:03:00 PM
This is so well written--the words given blend in seamlessly in your verse--enjoyed the read, Pandita--you always write winning poetry.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/26/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay for your kind compliments which I appreciate! Hope you are doing well! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/26/2020 3:45:00 PM
WOW!:-) beautiful sensual and perfect for the contest, i dont need to wish you luck Pandita this is amazing!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/26/2020 4:01:00 PM
Oh my dear Jan, thank you so kindly for your wonderful words! Hoping all is well with you and your family! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/26/2020 3:40:00 PM
Love your use of the ten allocated words Pandita. Well written, good luck Tom Hope you're well.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/26/2020 3:42:00 PM
Hi Tom, I'm doing well and hope you are too! Thank you so very much my friend for your lovely compliments! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

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