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In this life I walk alone, Along a path that is hardly known. Against the world, against my fears, Fighting nothing but hopes and tears. Here I find a lonely rose, It cries so softly that nobody knows. I hold it tight so thorns pierce through, Dripping down is blood so blue. I continue on my path so grey, Into the darkness of vast array. A voice so lonely it will never be heard, A life so worthless it should just be interred.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2016 3:08:00 AM
Lotti Dah, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:42:00 PM
Lotti, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:50:00 AM
Moving poem....hope you will find some to go along with in your life. - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:20:00 PM
Sentimental... but left me heartbroken. Oh, man. Poor rose <3
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Lotti Dah
Date: 6/11/2012 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much :)

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