Undeniable

"Undeniable" by: Eric L. Boddie The brightest star that ever reached our skys Is pale in comparison to the light within those eyes Youthful Beauty so pure and strong With the softest brown placed exactly where it belongs Every glance, however, does come at a cost The windows to her Soul leave every observer lost Something mesmerizing, something hypnotizing, something extreme, something rare These are the reasons why it's so very hard not to stare Heavenly Gems Perfectly Crafted By God's Hand The Beauty within her eyes is too much for any to withstand And there is absolutely nothing about her eyes that is less than desirable Her eyes are truly The Work Of God, Simply Undeniable

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2018 10:57:00 PM

Beautiful , Eric... the eyes to the soul of love :)

Jennifer M.

Date: 9/14/2015 4:48:00 PM

Wow! This is a true masterpiece my friend. I wonder? Who do you write about? She is captivating. A perfect 10! Thank you for sharing. Take care. Be blessed. ~Jennifer =refinnej

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/14/2015 10:16:00 PM

I write about so many different women....Beauty can be found in the most surprising places....this here however was written about a forbidden inspiration....meaning it is about my lil cousins friend....she has the most Beautiful eyes....but of course I told him I was gonna write this before I did....lol

James Inman

Date: 9/4/2015 1:42:00 PM

Great write. Enjoyed it very much.

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/14/2015 1:29:00 PM

thank you james....it pleases me that a talent like yours feels this....

Constance La France

Date: 8/28/2015 3:03:00 PM

Eric, beautifully penned poem with many wonderful lines A7 and thanks for visiting my hushed pen poem

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/14/2015 1:25:00 PM

thank you bw....I was Blessed to have had this inspiration....;)