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Unconquerable

midst the bosom of a once bountiful farm lies the graveyard of my ancestors~ the gush of tears that flowed here- only the wind knows; the willows by the brooks~ are barely there, and those who survived have so many stories to tell. still flowing- the Vito river despite so many summer drought still limpid on its march to the sea whilst faded on its parched sands my whilom friends' footprints~ who ran so fast that time until youth came elusive in their eyes the placid breeze now echo nostalgic reminiscence of a once warm abode... oh, how time devoured the dainty dreams we built how time entombed unspoken anguish on beloved ones' eternal repose... how time like wind teased our midnight lamps and yet we lived the night like day~ with so many songs to sing... with so much love to share... when taste of life was only sweet. oh, how we passed the time away~ unmindful of its ticking... unmindful where did it go now, as I stand ~ in front of these forlorn tombstones in my hands are stone tablets that bear the names of two people who were once a slave of time; in peace, they slumbered~ for they finally conquered, the unconquerable.

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Date: 10/27/2022 2:44:00 PM
Exquisitely written and touching piece. Congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:01:00 PM
Congrats, JCB, for this top placement. Just finished reading this for the first time. I am very touch by this piece. Blessings
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Date: 12/9/2020 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this exquisite write, another congrats for topping the top 100 new poems, I'm a fan!
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Date: 12/7/2020 8:34:00 AM
"the gush of tears that flowed here- only the wind knows" So lovely. Also the line, "oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt" Really spoke loudly to me. <3 Well done
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Date: 12/4/2020 11:36:00 PM
J, this is really quite exquisite writing. Dealing with time and death and loved ones with a healthy dose of wisdom and cherishing life. Your ending line is so wonderful. Congratulations for both your 1st place in the contest and for rising to the top of the Best New Poems list! Enjoy your weekend, my friend ~ John
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Date: 12/1/2020 4:10:00 PM
Read and loved this poem many times, but late in leaving a comment. Oh JCB, such an enchanting piece! Admired each and every line, every word! To my Faves. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:01:00 PM
this is amazing!! Such a well deserved first place (well, I think I saw somewhere here that you got first place) This is most profound. FAVE.
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Date: 11/26/2020 5:47:00 AM
“oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt” a wonderful line of many in this beautiful write JCB, congratulations on your win in the contest, so deserved, well done... Belle
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Date: 11/25/2020 1:22:00 AM
wonderful and so poetic. beautiful. well done.Pete.
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:07:00 PM
A truly remarkable poem, JCB!! The emotion burns like a night torch of emotional intensity waiting for the morning star. Superb poetry. May love light your path in life.
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Date: 11/20/2020 11:49:00 AM
Hello JCB Burl, it is always interesting to visit a historical because there is lots of history there. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 11/19/2020 10:13:00 AM
I can see you put your heart and soul into this. what wonderful but sad words.Well done. excellent.
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Date: 11/17/2020 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this exquisite work. It's a Fave for me. :)
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Date: 11/16/2020 6:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading , congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/16/2020 12:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winner. Very descriptive of life and death. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2020 7:10:00 PM
JCB, it is such a pleasure for me to return to your exceptional poem with my best congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. I loved reading this piece again, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/15/2020 5:56:00 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry, J. 'Oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt' speaks volumes. A very touching ending, the freedom of two who were once a slave to time. Congratulations on this most deserving win ~ John
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Date: 11/15/2020 5:21:00 AM
I can see why this received a high placement. Congrats.
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Date: 11/15/2020 2:03:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 11/13/2020 9:26:00 PM
I love the quote and the poem, JCB. You're right. Time waits for no one. Hope you have a great weekend :)
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Date: 11/13/2020 7:43:00 PM
Wow! Dear poetess, JCB, magnificence flows from your golden pen. This wistful memoir takes my breath away with its textured imagery, metaphoric beauty and with tears glisten in-eyes-looking-back despite the smile of "nostalgic reminiscence" when the "taste of life was only sweet". I loved "how time like wind teased our midnight lamps" - and - "how we passed the time away~ unmindful of its ticking...unmindful where did it go" -exquisite! I adore this piece and admire the your artistry. Read this gem several times to absorb the water-colored memories. A Fav! Your last line is a grand finale to an inspired and inspiring poem. Gorgeous poetry!! Best wishes for a win, my gifted friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/13/2020 6:54:00 PM
I really really enjoy reading this, it’s beautiful and inspiring. Kudos, JCB, and all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 11/13/2020 4:33:00 PM
Beautifully inspired and inspirational, a heart flowing with crimson floods from a pen caught by veins filled with your muse. God bless you with many more wonders
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Date: 11/13/2020 12:46:00 PM
I see you were inspired by the quote... Your vocabulary is also improving
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Date: 11/13/2020 7:47:00 AM
- History of the time ... excellent written, JCB :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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