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Unconfined

As our golden years began, you and I made a pact. In youth we once soared high, but now our skin is cracked and our best years seem hijacked. When I was diagnosed with illness, you were the first person I called and I marveled at your stillness. You didn’t phone for weeks; I was appalled, being tossed away by one who’s fat and bald. Looking for a replacement after four years. the next day you were on dating sites, Is your tired old photo being met there by cheers? Pact-breaker, this just bites! I won’t be there when they give you last rites. Any woman you find won’t stay with you long; sarcastic cheaters stay with their kind. Perhaps another innocent will come along, but your whiskey and alcohol she’ll leave behind. Yours is the fate of one who by a pact won’t be confined. *Pact poem for Paula’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/30/2012 8:13:00 AM
Well who needs this type anyway Carolyn?? you see how well you did Gettin me all fired up there for a bit ;even on my 2nd visit.." Hope the new year finds you well, And I wish Gods blessings to you in Abundance..! Joe..)
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:53:00 AM
A great poem here Carolyn!Missing your poetry!!How are you?
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Date: 5/12/2012 9:54:00 AM
nicely expressed from the depth. Cindy
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:13:00 PM
Best wishes in the contest Carolyn with this cutting edge write.Joe..."
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Date: 5/9/2012 2:08:00 PM
Hey! That fat, bald s.o.b. will get his one of these days. He threw away a diamond for a zircon. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:24:00 AM
like lizzle below, wow! Carolyn, this is up there with your best. got to be a winner. to my fav to join heaps of others of yours. love, Harry
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:08:00 AM
Wow, this one bites deep Carolyn; cheaters never prosper. Makes me wonder if this was your experience or is it just a poem. I find there are a lot of personal experiences in our poetry which in the writing might be cathartic. Thanks for sharing luv and hope you are doing ok _ Lizzie
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:04:00 PM
just like i said ; love from begining to end.
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Date: 5/6/2012 3:00:00 AM
Carolyn, a painful episode, but not as painful as what you are going through, good luck, how is your health hun...David
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:31:00 PM
good luck in the contest with scathing reprimand Carolyn
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