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Unconditional Love

I gave you love Without condition Held you close Beneath my wing Took you high And helped you sing Guided you through Stormy weather Tickled you With my feather Cheered you up When you were down Never let you Hit the ground Danced with you In the rain With my tears I wiped your pain But now it’s time You took the reins As I take flight To tranquil plains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/31/2013 1:23:00 PM
i SEE WHY YOU LIKED MY POEM LOVE YOU HAVE SOME SOUP MAIL MY FRIEND HOPE YOU WELL XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/1/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thank you David, that's what love is all about XXX
Date: 2/8/2013 1:59:00 PM
Now that's what I'm talking about.
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Date: 1/30/2013 11:58:00 AM
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE SOUNDS LIKE YOU GIVE YOUR HEART ALOT AND THE OTHER PERSON GAV NOTHING BACK SELVISH LOVER X DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM
Neat structure, rhyming and exceptional language! Well done Elizabeth!! Love, Keith
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Keith, love Elizabeth
Date: 1/27/2013 8:14:00 AM
NICE FLOW GOOD JOB
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/27/2013 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Autry, love Elizabeth

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