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Unconcious Conciousness

Like it has been said before "A dream within a dream" Again has brought me back, back to this rippling stream No wild life, only trees, no wind Just me alone there with my sin OH! How unlucky I am to be stuck within Sal F. Manela Rippling Stream 6/4/11

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Date: 6/5/2011 6:52:00 PM
Sal, nice philosophy.. a dream stuck in a dream. wow! to feel trapped in every angle.. your a great poet. take care,..p.d.
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