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Uncertainty

Uncertainty Uncertainty beats, Traverse through chords of my heart, Mind keeps pulling strings, Apprehension overwhelms, Firm decision sets the rhyme ! Tanks- 5/7/5/7/7 Written September 22nd, 2014 For contest 'Any new poem' by Alfred Vassallo

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Date: 9/25/2014 12:09:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:24:00 PM
That was very nice...Tell Me what type of Poetry is this Mam..Which classification does it fall into??? I'm trying write different types My self and Learn from Others...I really enjoyed this write and its style...
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:02:00 PM
Once again a lovely Tanka Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:28:00 AM
This should rank high in the contest. Good Luck.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thnx Maurice! U r so very kind to me!
Date: 9/22/2014 11:38:00 PM
I enjoyed this one. Good luck in the contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thnx Andrea for ur sweet words!
Date: 9/22/2014 7:52:00 AM
This is great...the beat goes on....hugs Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thnx Tim! Appreciate ur words!
Date: 9/22/2014 7:49:00 AM
Uncertainty is a beast, stand firm! Good luck in the contest. Hugss sweetie :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thnx Cas!

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