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Unbuttoned

Tiny glimpse of light From the corner of my eye. Shiny shell-pink on ivory silk Glinting against the grey carpet. My favourite blouse Unbuttoned, wrinkled, In a pile on the floor. Last night fills the room like smoke. I climb out of bed on shaky legs, Stepping over dirty clothes. The board creaks in protest, Fighting the unfolding Like my heaving chest. With trembling hands, I smooth the silk, Ironing out the wrinkles, Careful not to let the buttons snag.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/18/2013 11:23:00 AM
And yeah, I try my best to see that my kids grow up happy. We have lots of fun together. I thought ya'll would get a kick outta that avatar...love yours, by the way(that's not a soup flirt or anything...so don't worry bout that..ha) but what can I say?...very easy on the eyes!
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Date: 4/18/2013 11:19:00 AM
My Lord, what did you do the night before?!...haha...none of my business. I think this poem is extremely cool, Heather.
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:24:00 AM
I like the way this is so matter of fact, observant and pushes all the right buttons!
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Date: 1/25/2013 6:44:00 PM
Unique spin. I am always amazed by the different ideas people come up with. You have done a wonderful job of describing everything.
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Date: 1/24/2013 10:35:00 PM
Girl; this is some poem. It's good and I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and also for reading my poem. God bless. Lucilla
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Date: 1/24/2013 6:42:00 PM
I continue to be impressed by your work and this one is no exception; that eighth line stands alone, it is a stunner...I don't know what it is but I've noticed that most of our canadian poets are extremely talented, I think there must be something in the canadian water that produces good writers! :)
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:05:00 PM
wonderful write Heather....best wishes
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Date: 1/24/2013 4:20:00 PM
wow, sounds like a wild night preceded. this was a very inventive way to do the contest, my friend. you rocked it!!!
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:57:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry into Susan's contest! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:13:00 PM
Allowing yourself to lose and regain control, a to and fro we all play out. A healthy part of living I think. This is lovely. Thanks.
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Date: 1/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
Sweet and sultry!
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