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Music blended with nature's dark, unbroken cadence and rhapsody. Waves crashing vigorously, reverberating in my mind with the graceful notes of the piano, the fragrance of wet foliage and the perfume of wildflowers mingling, I perceive a view of inspiration for this poet's muse. Twittering, chirping birds wrapped in the cadenza of a gentle flute drifting, a bouquet delicate, and pleasing, entwined in the scent of the forest, my wandering spirit comes closer for a sweet magical glimpse. The whisper of the wind, a symphony tangled with the violin's quivering, throbbing melody, such redolence, this penetrating overture for my soul, I lift my eyes to God's painted sky, gazing beyond the clouds, floating in this unbroken rhapsody. ___________________________ September 16, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/Unbroken Rhapsody Copyright Protected, ID 15-709-929-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Mixed Senses, sponsor, Nette OnClaud Fifth Place

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Date: 10/8/2015 2:02:00 AM
Awesome write broken! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 10/3/2015 3:45:00 PM
a rhapsody that fills my senses, constance.. great tempo for the theme.. big congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
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Date: 10/3/2015 3:02:00 AM
Your poem is so lovely, Broken Wings, and your mixed senses come together like a symphony! Congratulations on your nice win Sandra
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:55:00 PM
Broken,, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 8:55:00 PM
Loved the musical charm. Nice Win Broken Wings.
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Date: 10/2/2015 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful write!!!!
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:27:00 PM
this is just gorgeous for the musical theme, Constance. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:13:00 PM
I am enjoying the appeal to the senses, Constance, especially through the music of sounds. ~ Congratulations on a lovely win! // paul
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Date: 10/2/2015 3:37:00 PM
a delightful mix of nature and music congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2015 3:29:00 PM
Very eloquent and unique Broken Wings. Every word flowing in perfect harmony of description and a supreme level of poetry.
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:58:00 PM
- A wonderful mix of nature's music and beautiful words, B.W. - A winning poem .... good luck - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:29:00 PM
as your pen strums my heart....this unbroken melody starts....Beautifying in every single part....bw your art is at the top of the charts....;)
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