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Unbroken Chains

unbroken chains hold my steer over bruised knees bled dry off my second hand adventure throughout scarred elbows unbroken chains hold my steer no.6—Bike Thabang Jan Ngoma 08-06-2015 Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest Name: A PRIZED REFRAIN

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2015 1:16:00 PM

- I'm a little late, but better late than never :) - Congratulations on your 7. place in the contest, Thabang - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

Well done, Thabang! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 3:19:00 PM

a nice win... SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/17/2015 8:28:00 AM

Wow an amazing write Thabang! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 8:10:00 PM

how nice you did one for bike. I loved my old bike too! Congrats on your win.

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 10:06:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...this write was experimental...I like tryn' out new things to challenge myself (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2015 4:00:00 PM

Love your take of the image Thabang congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 10:12:00 PM

Hi Jan...many thanks, I still have scarres from those accidents, but it's all part of growing up (:heerd, Tbang