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Unbearable Beauty On Her Face

I first saw sensuality on her face; Sweet, red lips, bedroom eyes, And a smooth, flawless face. It was the most beautiful face that I had Ever seen; the horizon as the sun sets Or a sky bursting with meteor showers Couldn’t outmatch it. Tears in my eyes was my response To this master art; I couldn’t bear My emotions seeing Gaia in front of me; Her beauty revealing her infinite divinity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/22/2014 10:48:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment once again
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Date: 5/22/2014 9:08:00 AM
Teddy, thank you for the comment on my comment
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/22/2014 9:55:00 AM
You are always welcome Linda!!! ^_^
Date: 5/22/2014 12:01:00 AM
Teddy, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, it identifies within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/22/2014 2:27:00 AM
Thank you for defining my poem's hue and structure in such a sweet way Skat! I appreciate your applause, thanks!!!! ^_^ <3 <3 <3
Date: 5/21/2014 6:54:00 PM
this is a fine charming poem...Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/22/2014 2:28:00 AM
Thanks for your applause and support Linda!!!! ^_^ <3 <3 <3
Date: 5/21/2014 11:53:00 AM
awesome write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/22/2014 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Nathan! :-)

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