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Unbearable Beauty

Within nature there are some great aspects Like going on walks that take you on treks Many picnics are wanted in nature Romantic getaways are the future There is some kissing in the rose garden The beauty exists never to harden A harsh human nature is the break-up There are lonely strolls that make a shake-up A single status erupts from your soul Now eating out alone is your new role It’s a time when no more stars do twinkle Unbearable sadness makes a wrinkle Seeing nature has facets where you see This nature is unbearable beauty Russell Sivey Contest: Unbearable Beauty Sponsor: frank herrera 5/18/2013

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John Posey

Date: 6/2/2013 8:04:00 PM

Russell, I'm really impressed by your entry. I'm left with the same feeling I had in writing "Blue Ridge Mountain Overlook" I felt cheated in having no one with whom to share this feeling. Great work... Jake

Jack Horne

Date: 5/19/2013 11:23:00 AM

love this sensitive write, Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2013 4:03:00 AM

the pain and beauty of loss so beautifully inscribed through your romantic ink and divine imagery! This is very lovely indeed,russell... a breathtaking and memorable.. this is greeat stuff, my frind!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2013 12:52:00 AM

this for me is about the only way to interpret that topic of unbearable beauty. Something to do with lost love, you got it, russell.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2013 1:51:00 PM

your poem is beautiful and meaningful, Russell, a sweet image of love and time passing by... enjoyed~ Linda

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/18/2013 12:10:00 PM

I really like where you went with this. The poem takes a turn at "A harsh human nature is the break-up There are lonely strolls that make a shake-up". Life can be harsh. great poem

Judy Konos

Date: 5/18/2013 7:14:00 AM

Well Russell you hit that nail so hard it can never be retrieved,...Best wishes in the contest ......

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2013 7:00:00 AM

Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading even though it ends on a sad note..Thanks for stopping by...Soup Mail soon..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 5/18/2013 6:44:00 AM

Does make it even more noticeable doesn't it....nice poem Russell...