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Unbalanced

There was a tight rope walker named Rhett Who bravely refused offers to use a net. One night midway on the wire Crotch itch struck like flash fire. What followed hundreds seek to forget.

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/20/2016 11:00:00 PM

Oh my.....hahahah...wait let me read more...before i die laughing...hahah

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:28:00 PM

OUCH!!! - Oh Paul the image you created is hilarious! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx I have recently posted a couple of limericks too lol:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2015 4:19:00 PM

You flatter me Paul! I think I am making up for lost time with my writing - from never having written before to over 530 poems I can't believe the journey I have been on in the past 13 months - from day one I wanted to show my humourous side but I can write deep dark and sad - I surprise myself with some of the words I come out with ! Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/7/2015 4:15:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. I just read the two you recently posted. They provide proof anew that you are a marvel.