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It's the look of anticipation in a preschoolers eyes as he holds your hand near the playground gazing in skies. It's the prolonged kiss when the preacher says to the couple side by side “I pronounce you man and wife, you may kiss the bride.” It's the gaze of a kitten as she swats at the laser light as she hopes for a game that is fun and bright. It's the yard in the morning after a night of cold snow when the sun is just high enough and the wind has stopped its blow. But love from the Creator God is by far the most of all the most perfect source of unassailable purity without any downfall.

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Date: 12/20/2023 2:56:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Miranda. Well written poem with great message, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 12/20/2023 8:22:00 PM
Glad you really like this and put it on your favorites!
Date: 10/29/2023 9:24:00 AM
Loved it Miranda and the ending is so spiritual. Blessings.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/29/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thank you! I had to end a poem about purity with the Creator God, for that is the purest source of them all.
Date: 10/29/2023 6:43:00 AM
Nice rhymes Miranda, you wrote this one so well..
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/29/2023 7:23:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/28/2023 7:09:00 PM
Well-crafted couplet with great imagery and thoughts, Miranda. Best wishes for the contest.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/28/2023 7:47:00 PM
Thanks!

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