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I tremble before you, my vying emotion I thought I could be loved with complying emotion My mirror used to love my sight there is no more of that undying emotion Neglect tore at me, scattering me into shards This whole life of mine is fragmented by self-denying emotion Love is what you give away To anything but my trying emotion If you came back it'd be too late- You permanently left the scar of dying emotion

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:28:00 PM
Dakota, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome poem, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:32:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Dakota :) - Have a lovely Easter :) -
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Date: 3/26/2024 9:32:00 AM
Expressions of love and pain in crushing emotion. Nice. Congratulations Dakota! :)
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:34:00 AM
I like the use of mirror in this poem Dakota. Fragmented; shards; scattered... perhaps shattered and broken leaving scars. Thanks
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Date: 3/23/2024 9:09:00 PM
Sending u all my love, lovely write
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Date: 3/23/2024 10:15:00 AM
Would you want them back? To flourish, you need love, anything else lacks empathy.
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Dakota Williams
Date: 3/23/2024 11:19:00 AM
In all honesty, I'd rather be suppressed by the grief of not being with them than not knowing what love and living feels like.

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