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Feelings crash thoughts flash remembering the past as pain fills me so fast broken dreams my aching heart another day that were apart a cut here a slice there another tear i cannot bare a dark soul a cut wrist suffering in pain due to bliss my pain is real but love is fake the feelings i feel which keeps me awake unable to sleep with this feeling to keep leads me to the razor making long slices so deep. -Spencer Coggdale dedicated to Roxy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/20/2011 6:12:00 AM
Emotion to the extreme and well writen but you have got to get yourself some help. Live is way to short to be misserable all the time. And injuring yourself only makes it worse it dose not gain you sympathy or love. Hope you work things out. sincerly Bobb
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