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Unabated Spring

The wily Winter wind danced in the face of Spring; Chasing brittle leaves across the straw colored lawn. Whipping brittle branches from the maple trees, to fall like pick-up sticks in a childish game. The Spring sun maintained vigilance, non-pulsed by the murder of crows lining the power lines; refusing to rise to the wild winds bait. Sunshine poured like melted butter over the soggy soil attempting to lure the early risers from their sleep. Crocus’s stir.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 2:47:00 AM
Beautiful spring write, I can smell the damp, and renewel comming on the wind, love, Kristin
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:24:00 PM
Awesome write, Debbie. I love the rich images. I like the strength in your words. Waiting for the crocus! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:48:00 PM
great write. i love reading this, it was like a short story. well penned- love and peace-james
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Date: 2/12/2009 10:06:00 AM
Deborah this poem takes the reader away on a journey then brings him safely back where he stops and thinks- wow that was cool - God Bless you and those who share your heart - beautiful poetry - MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:32:00 AM
once i imagined that they were having church. only heaven knows what they do in the murder of crows. john
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:17:00 AM
Love this, with the winds kicking up here in my area and the sun doing its best to smile on us, this piece comes alive. Excellent use of clear imagery and word flow. Michael
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