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Un Poquito

Her love began
as a little bit
then slowly
began to snowball...

She appeared
as a snowflake...

Gently descending
upon my hill
beginning to roll
slowly downwards...

I took notice
gathering her up...

With sculpting hands
clumped her together
three dimensional affections
length, width and height..

Rolled and clumped
she took form...

Silly carrot nose
two chocolate chip
cookies for eyes
a raisin smile...

Little by little
I love her more each day...

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  1. Date: 2/15/2014 9:36:00 PM
    ahhh, this is so so sweet!!! It's so great to meet new poets. Well, you must have been here a while now but I hope to see many more of your poems. Finally getting off here for the night!!!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 2/15/2014 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea!
  1. Date: 12/28/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Hi Ken, I do Love these fun writes that you do. Little by little each day you sculpt your Love into the desire of your heart. Isn't that just like Love, everything starts off tentatively and as time progresses it grows and blossoms, just like a snowball running down the hill grows larger and larger. This one is different Ken but good different. As i always say we all have to do it our own way and as always you are unique Ken. Have a good Sunday. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 12/28/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading this one Mike.. Ken