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UN-TAUT THOUGHT

I thought And overthought …thought again The thought …was not the thought That it had been I pondered it ….and thought …Why did I have that thought …And when

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2024 6:00:00 PM

I taught I taw a putty-tat. ~ Tales from the Far Side

Lin Lane

Date: 1/21/2024 11:56:00 AM

Does the phrase, "Don't overthink it" come to mind? How about the song from Frozen? 'Let it go' la la la. And now it's time for the playoffs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2024 9:17:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/creative write. Yes, we sometimes we over think things... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/21/2024 8:31:00 AM

overthinking? hmm...a source of frustration for me when I engage my overthinking brain.

Joseph May

Date: 1/21/2024 8:10:00 AM

Thoughts within a thought then fading away

Di11y Da11y

Date: 1/21/2024 7:05:00 AM

A lot of time can pass that way, once it fades it will be a source of frustration that it was brilliance and is now lost, existing in the gaps in this poem.