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passed you by, had never saw your face But something in the mind, couldnt be erased A feeling that was felt, so unexplainable. You turned back and saw, what. the, heart was telling you. It wasn't a striking beauty, It wasn't the prettiest face. Just another human being, who's soul sang a sweet praise. I never heard that song before, but it spoke gently to me. It said did I touch you? Did you hold back a tear for me? Before I could reply, a tear had fell, to the floor. The feeling was deeply, unconditional, I didnt see it coming at all. The atmosphere, was filled with the heaviest particle of air. It clouded my whole being, but I had no fears. It was so familiar, something we both had shared, It went beyond spoken words, it was a love dyeing to be shared. My core was violated, my mind set free. The presence that encompassed Me was , another soul that was lost, who just wanted to be loved. Like me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/24/2013 8:39:00 AM
Like Somewhere In Time our paths have crossed or our state of mind has become one mind by living in the here and now. I love this poem. And you need glasses Cherie you are beautiful and your poetry tells me you are not just another human being. Be good to you; Michael.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 11/25/2013 8:34:00 PM
Hi Michael. ...truly appreciate your kind words. Thanks so much means so much to me :) <3 cherie
Date: 9/5/2013 12:11:00 PM
oh yea! I can almost see and feel the meaning in the writ. I have read much of your poems, you're a true inspiration. JM
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 9/5/2013 5:01:00 PM
Hi jm,,,that was a beautiful comment. Really value & appreciate your kind words:) many thanks,,, Cherie...
Date: 8/4/2013 7:28:00 AM
A new twist on love at first contact. Very moving.
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/6/2013 1:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard always appreciate your lovely comments:0)
Date: 8/1/2013 10:10:00 AM
breaking me into pieces, cherie... so woberfully crafted.. i like!..:) huggs
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/1/2013 10:23:00 PM
awhhh sorry nette, lol,,,, im glad you liked though :) cherie~<3~
Date: 7/30/2013 3:46:00 PM
there's so much to ponder in the joining of souls. A force or energy we cannot see but feel immensely. Very well described. :)
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 PM
Thanks so much karen,,, very true a real force it is...really appreciate your, kind comment ty:0) cherie x
Date: 7/30/2013 9:00:00 AM
This gripped my heart intensely. I feel this piece within my past. Excellent job!
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/30/2013 8:01:00 PM
Wow Drake,,, truly appreciate your comment:) many thanks to you.... made me :) ty...cheriex
Date: 7/30/2013 8:19:00 AM
No one does it like you Cherrybunny.You have an original style of your own that I like.Oh and sorry for changing the bunny pick on CS.I actually put it back up because someone would have had me for supper.A fine write.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/1/2013 3:07:00 PM
Somebody say dramatic.Oh well we both had some whiskey to drink that night.Never will the bunny leave your side because you're someone special,just remember that always.Now go to bed..lol
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/30/2013 7:59:00 PM
Your so lovely M,,, thankyou for that comment....lol no way not bunny....ok maybe I was a lil dramatic lol,,,but glad hes back:) have a great night.....big hugz...cheriex

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