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Umbrella

when rain tumbled the skies they blackened lightening wrapped around branches and pulled stripping some autumn red leaves wind shears push crystal rain against my house polishing and cleansing away impure dust and debris i l o v e / a / g o o d / shower

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Date: 12/8/2016 6:37:00 PM
so cute how you did this and the way it ended with the handle, excellent last words!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 12/8/2016 12:48:00 PM
- A great shape poem, Kim - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thank you :)

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