Ultimate Sacrafice

I have found a pureness within him that my soul thrives for.
I am driven by the desire to please him without boundaries.
His image holds the power to freeze my movement, the vibration of his voice holds the power to tremble me. 
His heart holds the power to break me, his soul holds the power to expire me.
I believe in him for his intention and desire.
I believe in him for who he is and his worth.
I believe in his now and his future.
I believe in him for his knowledge and his potential.
I believe in his skill as a provider and his force to become.
I feel he is somebody I had once lost.
I feel between us a bond stronger than mankind can create.
A fate unknown, undecided, I give myself to him to have, to do with it what he will, to make it his own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/8/2014 11:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Bessie. The dedication to that one whose so great is ,deeply expressed in this amazing piece. Great description, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 2/7/2014 2:49:00 PM
This is so wonderful! I can really relate to this right now!
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Date: 9/25/2013 7:52:00 AM
This is a poem filled with love, devotion, honor, dedication, connection of two souls and heart. nice job
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Date: 11/7/2012 10:46:00 AM
Bessie, thanks for sharing your beautiful poem. - Have a nice day. - oxox - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bessie Kolb
Date: 11/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for reading!!!
Date: 10/28/2012 12:55:00 PM
Now that's what devotion is all about. I love the conviction that springs forth in the poem. Well witten Bessie!
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Bessie Kolb
Date: 11/7/2012 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading!
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