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Ultimate Betrayal

Playful laughter rests. Parental steps come nearer - reality fades.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/9/2013 1:46:00 PM

Totally understand..Great work..Sara

David De La Croes
Date: 5/10/2013 4:12:00 AM

Thank you, Sara.

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/22/2013 11:56:00 PM

Very ominous, left me feeling unsettled--but that's precisely why I like it.

David De La Croes
Date: 4/23/2013 1:09:00 AM

Thank you for your comments, Jeremy. Poets are sometimes the voice of the voiceless, especially on topics which are oppressive. Have a great week, David.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2013 2:58:00 AM

- Well done haiku, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes
Date: 4/22/2013 8:04:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Pity the subject is so grim... David