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Billie Boy was a lad from Down Under Who with explosives rarely did blunder. But he became diverted By a blonde short-skirted. Blam! Off to Wagga Wagga asunder.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2016 8:08:00 PM

I see that I already commented on this one. I wonder how many others of yours I have seen. Hope you will keep visiting me. If I see someone comment to me, I always visit them back.Otherwise, I forget who I have met here. One day I hope to have read all your limericks. I love writing that short form myself. Now I will track down this one I see you telling people is your favorite, Sausaged.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 2:53:00 AM

LOL, I would have kept it to myself... Super enjoyed. LINDA

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/14/2016 10:39:00 PM

Another good limerick, though I can't relate to Wagga Wagga. Must be a place or town in Australia. / M

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/14/2016 11:19:00 PM

You're right, Maurice. Wagga Wagga is a city in New South Wales, Australia. Thank you for your kindness in commenting.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/12/2016 7:40:00 PM

I tried to leave a comment on your blog page about your short story several times but it wouldn't take it, so I am leaving it here....Congratulations on your book of short stories Paul! Your wisdom shines in words you have posted in this blog. Stories to be shared with young minds such as my three year old granddaughter I am helping to raise. These values need to be instilled in youth to end hurtful words and bullying that we live with every day. I thank you for sharing your wisdom. Blessings, Connie

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/12/2016 9:46:00 PM

To say I value and appreciate your comment is to make a blatant understatement. Your values do, indeed, reflect my own (I deem that an honor). Years hence, historians will ask, "At what point did America lose her way?" I think an honest answer must be, "When she set aside her foundational values." Thank you, Connie. hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2016 3:53:00 AM

I love this Paul! It gave me a good laugh and I needed it. A perfect title you chose for it too! #7

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/11/2016 2:04:00 PM

Your kind words are gratifying, Connie. Please know of my appreciation, not only for your comment here, but also for your many words of encouragement re. my other efforts. hugsxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 8:38:00 PM

HA. Funny one!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/7/2016 10:52:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. It's kind of you to stop by with an encouraging reaction. I hope you have a wonderful day. hugsxxx

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/5/2016 6:11:00 PM

Lol , this is so good really , I've enjoyed every little word, great write as usual hugs / / :) dalia

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/7/2016 10:54:00 AM

Your encouraging words are as sweet music to my ears. Thank you, Dalia.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2016 1:08:00 PM

ha ha hope Lindsay reads it soon:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2016 11:23:00 AM

That made me smile Paul as Lindsay is a bloke lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/7/2016 10:59:00 AM

I've been hoping for the same thing, Jan. Knowing Lindsay, she'll respond with some supremely clever comment. In any event, I'm delighted the limerick gave you a laugh. Have a blessed day.

Skat A

Date: 1/5/2016 10:57:00 AM

Love it. :)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/7/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you, SKAT A. If you love it, I'm assured that it was worth posting (which is comforting). Have a blessed day.