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U n r a v e l a n d l e t m e t h r o u g h t h i s d o o r y o u h a v e l o c k e d s o l o n g a g o . . . W h e r e t h e h i n g e s h a v e r u s t e d , m a k i n g i t u n e a s y f o r i t t o o p e n , m a k i n g i t u n e a s y f o r m e t o t r y t o k n o c k ; f o r I a m s c a r e d o f t h e h a r s h w o o d i t ' s m a d e f r o m ; w o o d t h a t h a s b e e n p o u n d e d o n a n d s c r a t c h e d , b y o l d m e m o r i e s a n d m i s t a k e s , t h a t c l i n g o n t h e d o o r k n o b a n d t r y t o s e e p u n d e r. U n r a v e l S o I m a y s e e w h a t w a s i t t h a t I e . . . U m e t s n s o a r l o n g e . a a g o l l v . . . p e W h e r e o t h e r e S w a s . n o h e a r t s l o c k s o t h e r s j u s t e a c h k e y s t o t h a t h a d w e b o t h

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Date: 3/9/2011 11:27:00 PM
Jessica, This one is real creative. NwIIIce! ~JS Lambert
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:39:00 AM
nicely done...TAH
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:54:00 AM
well done shape!! I am impressed! I have trouble getting poems like that to stay in shape for me.
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:34:00 PM
~ And, I have missed viewing Your wonderful verses as of late for they have always seemed to be such a joy and honour to behold since I first came across Your many colours and splendors of pretty and beyond ~ This poems title seems to go hand in hand amid conveying a deepened emotion towards perhaps a loved one within Your beautiful hearts soul and, one can only hope that they You shall someday hold ~ "Brilliantly Crafted & Compelling" ~ "My Love to You Always," John!:) ~
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:19:00 PM
Smile ~ What a very creative way of expressing a heartful emotion from such a gifted and lovely lady as You Yourself dear and, I almost felt as though I were amid a vertigos moment towards the latter part of this splendid and stirring write from such a beautiful soul ~ Smile, "Hello Dear Talented & Precious Jessica Arteaga" ~ I hope that You are doing wonderfully this evening dear lady and that life has been warming Your Beautiful Heart amid the fireplaces of its love ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:32:00 PM
WoW!! Jessica, reading it twice made me a bit blind,,j.k.,, had fun really,,enjoyed your poem..and thanks for your awesome comment on my Epic poem,..p..d
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