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Two Worlds Colliding

softly breathes the wind collecting sprigs of twilight …moon deepens gold mist within quiet space flesh of petal lips collides …turning love skyward (c) Contest of Russell Sivey: Two Worlds Colliding by nette onclaud

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Kash Poet

Date: 9/27/2012 4:12:00 AM

Why not increase the number of words in 3rd 4th and 2nd line of the clerihew.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:28:00 PM

((()))!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM

NETTE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:47:00 PM

another beauty. Belated Congrats in this contest, Nette.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:32:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:33:00 AM

Nette, congrats on your great win....just beautiful..David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/11/2012 6:11:00 PM

Lovely write,Nette.Superb piece.Congratulations on your win,friend.Kudos to you.,

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:41:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/2/2012 10:19:00 AM

Wonderfully depicted the scene of two worlds colliding with beautiful words. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 8:44:00 PM

A pleasure to read your poetry this evening Nette. I am happy I was able to read some poetry tonight and so glad yours was among the poems I am reading. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2012 4:14:00 PM

Verrrrry NICE, Nette. I love it! Thanks for my win in your contest too!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/1/2012 12:42:00 PM

I am sure, this will make you forget about the rain you are having over there at the moment hey Nette? I quite enjoyed your approach with this one, made me smile tonight :) *hugs*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2012 10:40:00 AM

Winner for sure..Good luck in the contest..Such gentle passionate work..Thanks for the honor of being in the winner's circle in your contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2012 8:55:00 AM

simply beautiful Nette luv.. delightful imagery ..those lips are superb.. best wishes .. another number one.. thankxx so much for my big win in Rondine.. it is always a joy to create new pieces for u dear friend..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/1/2012 7:47:00 AM

you paint a pretty picture :) good luck in the contest!

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 3:41:00 AM

soup mail...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2012 3:22:00 AM

Lovely written in 6 lines ..... always !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise // Have a beautiful day Nette. :)

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 1:39:00 AM

Nette, a very sensual senryu, I love it, good luck..David