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Two Worlds Colliding

                                            You sat on one cloud...
                                           I sat on a another one...
                                            Clouds collide up high...

                                            Sharing the same sky...
                                     Thunder and lighting from love...
                                                A sunset to sleep...

                                               by Michael J Falotco
                                            "Two Worlds Colliding"

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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Ahh! Romantic..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:39:00 PM
    HI MICHAEL , a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:39:00 PM
    I remember how I loved this the first time. big congrats on your win, Michael.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Nice! a tardy congrats Michael...BG

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:18:00 PM
    Imaginative write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:25:00 AM
    Michael congrats on your great win....David

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your outstanding poem.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, Michael! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:41:00 AM
    MJF, this one has got a dreamy feel to it :) love it! love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:12:00 AM
    I agree with andrea. the clouds colliding is very creative. good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:33:00 PM
    I LOVE this one. wow, you took it to a heavenly realm. Truly imaginative.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:05:00 AM
    excellent Michael luv.. this says it all luv is fashioned .. best wishes and I share your sentiments with the comment u left me on y Colliding entry.. wow what a collision we would make ..oh JG in thoughtful mode.. dangerous.. xoxo

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:59:00 AM
    Michael a love one, I like it my friend, best of luck, have a great week as well...David