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Two Worlds Colliding

You sat on one cloud... I sat on a another one... Clouds collide up high... Sharing the same sky... Thunder and lighting from love... A sunset to sleep... by Michael J Falotco "Two Worlds Colliding" contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2012 4:15:00 PM

Ahh! Romantic..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:39:00 PM

HI MICHAEL , a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:39:00 PM

I remember how I loved this the first time. big congrats on your win, Michael.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/13/2012 7:24:00 AM

Nice! a tardy congrats Michael...BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:18:00 PM

Imaginative write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:25:00 AM

Michael congrats on your great win....David

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/11/2012 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your outstanding poem.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:19:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Michael! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/1/2012 11:41:00 AM

MJF, this one has got a dreamy feel to it :) love it! love & hugs CTH

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/1/2012 7:12:00 AM

I agree with andrea. the clouds colliding is very creative. good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:33:00 PM

I LOVE this one. wow, you took it to a heavenly realm. Truly imaginative.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 8:05:00 AM

excellent Michael luv.. this says it all ..how luv is fashioned .. best wishes and I share your sentiments with the comment u left me on y Colliding entry.. wow what a collision we would make ..oh JG in thoughtful mode.. dangerous.. xoxo

David Williams

Date: 7/30/2012 5:59:00 AM

Michael a love one, I like it my friend, best of luck, have a great week as well...David