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Two Worlds

mama’s ordered world nondebatable in youth tying me to the past modern day wonders appealing and distracting pulling at apron strings By: Joyce Johnson For contest "Two Worlds Colliding

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:29:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM

JOYCE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:46:00 PM

yours was SO good, Joyce. Congrats to you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:31:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:32:00 AM

Joyce congrats on your great win....David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/11/2012 6:17:00 PM

Awesome and superb piece,Joyce.Nice going..I love this.Congratulations on your well deserved win..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/11/2012 1:41:00 PM

love this beautiful and thoughtful senryu, Joyce - and I see it got first place (a very well deserved first place). Many congrats on this and all your wins, my friend : )

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:40:00 AM

Great write, Joyce! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/10/2012 10:05:00 AM

stop pulling grandma strings babz,lol,great write,best wishes

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/10/2012 9:05:00 AM

Trying to break your mother's mold, 'eh, Joyce...I tried it once too...It didn't work! ha ha ha...Great contrasts in this contest entry...Simply sensational! gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2012 8:48:00 PM

that's great how you had the new ideas pulling at your apron strings! GREAT way to do the contest, Joyce. And I'm happy you saw my September poem. yes, big celebration for us both!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/9/2012 9:29:00 AM

Great idea! This is absolutely true! Congratulations for an awesome, Senryu! Good luck and best wishes always, Joyce!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/9/2012 8:15:00 AM

great way to do the contest! I hadn't even thought of that! good descriptions :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2012 6:19:00 AM

Great thought went into this one..Yes, yesteryear and today do collide..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara