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Two Were Once One

I've known you now for forty years, and yet you seem to lack familiarity. I used to smile, dance a foxtrot with you - and trip with joy and hold that friendly hand. But where am I to find you? When, indeed? You're still alive but sitting with no twinkle? No love of me - the friendship we did share? No wrinkle in your eyes, no upward lips? That greatest shame, which so casts out what was a thing that used to bind us - keep us close, as part of one another's being - now shows such an absence, such a misery. It's now a void, the blackest chasm that could part two people - two who once were one. (Jan 2023)

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Date: 2/19/2023 2:10:00 PM
I like this and the way it is written. I’m reminded of “The Dangling Conversation” by Simon/Garfunkel. John
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Date: 2/20/2023 2:35:00 AM
Nice of you to leave a comment, JS. Hmm, the S&G song. Yes, I am rather reminded of it (and I have it on CD, along with a lotta S&G). Thanks again.

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