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Two Timer's

The edges of my laced sewn thought Fences my heart when we are apart

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2012 1:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats..Sometimes my thoughts need to be laced up and calmed down..Great work..Sara

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/17/2012 11:11:00 PM

Strong image, clean optimism - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2012 3:35:00 PM

wow, you did GREAT with the challenge of this one. Love the lace metaphor.

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/14/2012 10:49:00 PM

Oh very nicely done Joy - Shaz

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/14/2012 8:47:00 PM

nice write Joy

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/14/2012 7:12:00 PM

Very nice. Looks like a winner. About my poem. "To Forgive or Not" I was speaking from my own point of view only. and as if it were my own personal problem. Love, Joyce

Joy Wellington
Date: 10/14/2012 8:04:00 PM

I know it was your own personal thing dear Joyce, but just saying it matches my situation and I relate a lot. One love!