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There was one - then there were two... they looked identical, they sounded the same, they even laughed the same way. I saw one - she looked cute, or was it the other one? I talked to her - she seemed nice, or was it the other one? I asked her out - she said "yes," or was it the other one? I picked her up - she looked stunning, or was it the other one? We had a great time laughing, joking, and enjoying the time together. I dropped her off at her house - we kissed "goodnight" for hours, or was it the other one? While driving home, I couldn't stop thinking about her, or was I really thinking about the other one? For "A Dilemma" contest sponsored by Joe Flach.

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Date: 11/23/2011 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's "A Dilemma" contest George. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:47:00 PM
Congrats George on an excellent win for theser magnificent lines luv..
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:23:00 PM
Now, that would be a dilemma...lol,congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 11/22/2011 6:22:00 AM
Did you go on a date with one of the Wrigley Chewing Gum Girls? ha ha. This is a fun twist to the Dilemma Contest, Joe. You should get a standing ovation for cleverness. Always fun to see a guy's dilemma versus a girls. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/21/2011 6:43:00 PM
yeah, well, they all look alike. grats, George, i think... ~N
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:04:00 PM
wow ..excellent George.. a true dilemma in these lines ..good luck in the contest luv..
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Date: 11/1/2011 7:45:00 PM
Sounds like you were dating twins. Double Trouble!! Way to do the contest.
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