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TWO SIDES OF SHOWERS

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TWO SIDES OF SHOWERS


rain taps on grasses

dancing between pinkish toes

…cool ripples lull nights

 

more hard showers pound

flooding dampened moods non-stop

… gloomy dusk-eye frowns


What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown
Contest of Michael Falotico

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:02:00 PM
    a very well deserved win, Nette. BIG congrats

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:38:00 PM
    Nette. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win, Nette in Michael's contest, " What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown ". Like a painter inspired by Nature, you see with your poetic eyes the beauty that no one sees and turn it into a masterpiece. I have enjoyed reading your poem of " cool ripples lull nights ". Best wishes for a continued success. Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Gotta love that first senryu the most, Nette! Rain tapping on grass and dancing is grand imagery for me! It tickles my poetic senses immensely! Enjoyed this winning write!:) gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:47:00 AM
    I lioke the way you differentiate between 'good' and 'bad' rain. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:42:00 AM
    nice nette true to form too ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:04:00 AM
    congrats Nette luv on sweet success with this outstanding write and win .. way to go ..

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your win with these delightful Senryu, Nette. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations once again nette, well done pinkish toes, how cute is that.... xx

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Very good!!! Congrats Nette my dear sweet friend... hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 3:34:00 PM
    love your theme nette, rain dancing between pinkish toes, wow, iike that. good luck in contest.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Nette, how true...love it..pd

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:20:00 PM
    love this beautiful write, Nette - friends/colleagues think I'm mad but I just love rain, the heavier the better. Yes, lol, Sue and I loved Burton's Corpse Bride - Sue always cries at the end : )

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 4:53:00 AM
    a fine analogy Nette luv in lines featuring rain .. awesome visual excitement .. good luck .. oh heard bout Tsuami in Philippines on new .. ru OK? did it affect u? please be safe my friend .. Issac has left havoc on 4 States and remnants headed our way starting today into next week .. thinking of u with prayerful heart ..

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Imaginative pairing. Hope you have no reason to frown from this earthquake. Is all well?

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest' SKAT

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:30:00 PM
    a very unique and creative way to do the entry by doing those two very different sides of showers!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:45:00 AM
    This is a perfect example of feelings that are associated with a smile and a frown...Your images bring to life both powerful symbols! Awesome creation here my friend, Great Work!!

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