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Two Sides of Showers

rain taps on grasses dancing between pinkish toes …cool ripples lull nights more hard showers pound flooding dampened moods non-stop … gloomy dusk-eye frowns What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown Contest of Michael Falotico

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/7/2012 11:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:02:00 PM

a very well deserved win, Nette. BIG congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:38:00 PM

Nette. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Andrew Crisci

Date: 9/5/2012 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win, Nette in Michael's contest, " What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown ". Like a painter inspired by Nature, you see with your poetic eyes the beauty that no one sees and turn it into a masterpiece. I have enjoyed reading your poem of " cool ripples lull nights ". Best wishes for a continued success. Love, Andrew.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2012 1:11:00 PM

Gotta love that first senryu the most, Nette! Rain tapping on grass and dancing is grand imagery for me! It tickles my poetic senses immensely! Enjoyed this winning write!:) gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/3/2012 9:47:00 AM

I lioke the way you differentiate between 'good' and 'bad' rain. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/3/2012 9:42:00 AM

nice nette true to form too ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2012 9:04:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on sweet success with this outstanding write and win .. way to go ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/3/2012 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations once again nette, well done pinkish toes, how cute is that.... xx

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 6:51:00 AM

Very good!!! Congrats Nette my dear sweet friend... hugs n luv Michael

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 3:34:00 PM

love your theme nette, rain dancing between pinkish toes, wow, iike that. good luck in contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

Nette, how true...love it..pd

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:20:00 PM

love this beautiful write, Nette - friends/colleagues think I'm mad but I just love rain, the heavier the better. Yes, lol, Sue and I loved Burton's Corpse Bride - Sue always cries at the end : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2012 4:53:00 AM

a fine analogy Nette luv in lines featuring rain .. awesome visual excitement .. good luck .. oh heard bout Tsuami in Philippines on new .. ru OK? did it affect u? please be safe my friend .. Issac has left havoc on 4 States and remnants headed our way starting today into next week .. thinking of u with prayerful heart ..

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/31/2012 1:21:00 PM

Imaginative pairing. Hope you have no reason to frown from this earthquake. Is all well?

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2012 1:21:00 PM

Good luck in the contest' SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 12:30:00 PM

a very unique and creative way to do the entry by doing those two very different sides of showers!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2012 11:45:00 AM

This is a perfect example of feelings that are associated with a smile and a frown...Your images bring to life both powerful symbols! Awesome creation here my friend, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2012 11:22:00 AM

SMILE POETRY CONTEST!! And you are ready with your pen Nette. Love it - Good luck in this contest as well. I am "empty" ink ..... oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 8/31/2012 10:14:00 AM

Yeahh...good one!!Did he reopen the contest?