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Two Seconds To Say Goodbye

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This poem was written in response to a local teen who was killed while texting and driving.
It buzzed. She smiled. He had replied. Eagerly she dug Her phone From her pocket, Her other hand On the wheel. Her gaze remained ahead Into the darkness Of the cold wintery night. It buzzed again, The screen illuminating The shadows of the car. Would he be there? Would he come over After his shift at work Was done? “What did he say?” Another young voice replied. “Give me the phone.” She hesitated, Not fully trusting Her friend. Besides, She wanted to know. She wanted to see the words. She wanted feel The exhilaration Of reading his words To HER. She glanced down, The screen now dark, And fumbled To press the keys. “He’s coming,” she said Trying to calm The enthusiasm In her voice. Her heart beat harder. How did she look? What should she reply? Gr8 C U L8T In the same 2 seconds, she could have typed Goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/14/2018 4:27:00 PM
enjoyed reading this good job
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Date: 1/27/2013 2:00:00 PM
This interesting poem was a delight to read, Rachel, and I enjoyed how you orchestrated a terse and running dialog throughout this fine write, your well chosen words painting a picture worthy of an artist. Carl.
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:42:00 AM
ThankGod she didn't type goodnye..Lovely poem indeed..Charma
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