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Two Sad Sights

Walking in a park with sad heart My muse not giving a good start Saw two sad sights. Crippled dancer in custom dress Singer with scratchy voice in stress Moved by the sights.
+++ March 10, 2014 Form : Tail Rhymes Dr. Ram mehta Fifth Place win Contest: The Blues by Black eyed Susan

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Date: 6/4/2014 8:58:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is so heart touching and sad. To have a talent and lose it from something going wrong. Thank you for the nice comment on my Wild Night poem.
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Date: 3/30/2014 5:13:00 PM
DR RAM, Congratulations, enjoyed the win... Love ~Linda
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Date: 3/27/2014 4:55:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/25/2014 8:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 3/24/2014 7:35:00 PM
Tender write. Congratulations Dr. Mehta. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 3/24/2014 5:50:00 PM
yours was so interesting to read. I remember it from before. Congrats!
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Date: 3/24/2014 3:33:00 PM
Congrats Doc. Speaks to the soul of the creative soul.
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Date: 3/24/2014 1:26:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:06:00 PM
That would be sad to see two people with talents but handicapped in those talents. well done!
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Date: 3/10/2014 2:51:00 PM
Reads like a winner in poetic expression but not so with the entertainers..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:57:00 AM
Glad you were blessed with inspiration. :) Thanks for your kind comments on my poems. Soup mail.
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:12:00 AM
I saw them in a train ...Very sad...But I enjoyed their love on own dream...Nice Sir..Best wishes from my heart...
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:17:00 AM
good pen Ram hugs
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