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Two Roads To Paradise

At a junction Where left and right Lead to paradise There I stall At a spot Where going front and back Seems to be right There I stall At a point Where the river divides To two equal halves There I stall At a crossroads Where there are no road signs And no traffic light There I stall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Adebayo and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:11:00 AM
Dear Adebayo, Thank you for sharing your poetry this week. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:40:00 AM
LOL wonderful write Adebayo! Been at this place many times and sometimes I actually went a good way ... smile ... other times, well its all about life ... congratulations on having your great writing featured this week at the Soup!!
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Adebayo. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2009 4:06:00 AM
it is a situation when u are faced with two good things at thesame time and you are not allowed to choose more than 1 and both are of equal importance.
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Date: 9/26/2009 8:10:00 PM
Great write with great rhyming. It is also thought provoking for me. I'd have to ask, why do you think that both lead to paradise? If so, why hesitate which direction to go? Perhaps, in reality, one will lead to paradise, while the other will maybe end up nowhere. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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